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Saturday, December 24, 2011
Monday, December 19, 2011
What's wrong here? "At five fifty one of the kitchen guys reported for work."
The time should be spelled out.
The grammar is incorrect.
A punctuation mark might be necessary.
Nothing is wrong.
I agree with 74% of you. The sentence is not incorrect, but it could be confusing. I would add a comma:
"At five fifty, one of the kitchen guys reported for work."
Thursday, December 15, 2011
I know the answer. You?
Tuesday, December 13, 2011
"Choose clementine's with a uniform orange color, shinny skin, with no blemishes or wrinkles."
First, no apostrophe needed in the plural noun.
Second, I've never heard of "shinny skin"!
Monday, December 12, 2011
Is anything wrong with this sentence? "The district offers many choices in education and welcome open enrollment students from another Mesa school or another district."
Guess that was too easy ("welcome" should be "welcomes").
I'm just peeved that the school doesn't proofread all its communications! This month's lunch menu makes me crazy with its explanation of how "clementine's" are nutritious and "clementine's" are yummy. Four cases of "clementine's"!!! Arg!
Tuesday, December 6, 2011
Q: "There was an article in Friday's paper about jaguars in Arizona. The 10th paragraph begins 'The newly spotted cats...' My impression was that jaguars were permanently spotted. Do they develop new spots as the winter hair grows in?"
The answer explained that the writer meant that the cats had been recently seen, not that their spots developed.
Did any of you misread the sentence?
Monday, December 5, 2011
What's wrong here? "Once shipped, a customer will have to wait up to 14 days for the gift card to arrive in the mail."
The number should be spelled out.
The sentence is wordy.
The grammar is incorrect.
The sentence is just fine.
Congratulations to 65%! A customer--I hope!--doesn't get shipped. This is called a misplaced modifier. Here's a less humorous version of the sentence:
"Once the gift card is shipped, a customer will have to wait up to 14 days for it to arrive in the mail."
Friday, December 2, 2011
"Certain ordnances, such as those against illegal harvesting or poaching, did not earn respect."
"Ordnance" means military weapons; "ordinance" means laws.
Thursday, December 1, 2011
"Maybe some adjustments are in order, especially if your income or expenses has changed."
When you have an "or," you need to make the verb agree with the noun closest: "expenses have changed."
Wednesday, November 30, 2011
Monday, November 28, 2011
What's wrong with this sentence? "Citrines whose colors have been produced by artificial means tend to have much more of an orange or reddish caste than those found in nature."
Congratulations to 29% of you. The spelling of "caste" should have been "cast."
Wednesday, November 23, 2011
Monday, November 21, 2011
Which sentence is correct?
The turban turned slowly in the wind.
She earned more then $100,000 last year.
It's not fare that you get more candy!
I'll meat you at the mall.
Two are correct.
All are incorrect.
Congratulations to 40% of you!
Here are the corrected sentences:
The turbine turned slowly in the wind.
She earned more than $100,000 last year.
It's not fair that you get more candy!
I'll meet you at the mall.
Wednesday, November 16, 2011
"Using coupons from other sites or forums are not eligible."
Using this incorrect subject-verb agreement are not allowed! ("is")
Plus, this is a weird sentence. I would just state it in plain English:
"No coupons from other sites or forums."
Monday, November 14, 2011
Do you know when to use an ellipsis (...)?
I've recently seen ... a lot of extraneous ellipses stuck in the middle of sentences... A little bothersome!
Check out this Grammar Girl episode if you need a refresher.
Thursday, November 10, 2011
"Personally, I always fear the shorter revisions, they usually contain the most work."
As a favor to me on my birthday, please use correct punctuation:
"Personally, I always fear the shorter revisions; they usually contain the most work."
Monday, November 7, 2011
Friday, November 4, 2011
Thursday, November 3, 2011
Monday, October 31, 2011
Is something wrong here? "The heaviness and depth on his groundstrokes are also impressive, as is his agility and quickness around the court."
Congrats to 84% of you! Two problems, actually:
1) "Ground strokes" should be two words.
2) "Agility and quickness" are two separate concepts (as are "heaviness and depth"), so the "is" should be "are."
Shame on Tennis magazine!
Friday, October 28, 2011
The "that" is optional, though I agree with Duncan that the sentence is a little awkward.
Thursday, October 27, 2011
Hello! I asked you a question the other day on Facebook, but I have yet another question if you don’t mind. For some reason my department has made me the editor! I am currently editing a greeting that will be sent out by our association president. This person is assuming a new role as president. My question is, when are you supposed to capitalize titles? For example, “…it is with great honor that I assume the role of President for the State governing council…” This a quote from the greeting. I am pretty sure none of the titles should be capitalized. Also, I don’t believe state should be capitalized. But, president is being directly addressed so it might be capitalized. Help!
The term governing council is used throughout this greeting as well and a couple of us are arguing if the term should be capitalized at any point in the greeting.
Hi. Styles vary, so I would urge you to check the style guide your department tends to use. A general guideline is that if it forms part of a proper name you would capitalize but if it's used in a general sense, then lowercase. As for your examples, I would suggest lowercase "president" and lowercase "state," unless "State Governing Council" is the official name of the organization.
Wednesday, October 26, 2011
"We do have an editor on staff, whom will fix grammatical and spelling errors."
Yikes! Perhaps that editor should have checked the rules about "who" and "whom"!
He/she could have also reduced wordiness:
"Our staff editor will fix grammatical and spelling errors."
Monday, October 24, 2011
Thursday, October 20, 2011
Wednesday, October 19, 2011
"Police: Father let child drive while he was drunk"
My first thought was "The child was drunk?" Maybe this is the mom in me. Then I read that the child is a daughter.
Did you find this ambiguous?
Monday, October 17, 2011
What's wrong with this note written by my son? "I love you mom."
More than one thing.
Something or more than one thing, but I will ignore it/them because the note is so sweet.
I agree with 46% of you. My son was only nine at the time. There are two things wrong:
1) There should be a comma after "you."
2) "Mom" needs a capital M.
Tuesday, October 11, 2011
Monday, October 10, 2011
Thursday, October 6, 2011
Wednesday, October 5, 2011
"...she has a legitimate reason for horning in on the case."
I guess an "r" and an "n" next to each other could look like an "m," which needs to be in the middle of the word: "homing." All I can say is, "Weird"!
Tuesday, October 4, 2011
Monday, October 3, 2011
Do you proofread your own e-mail messages/texts/tweets?
Yes, I proofread everything I write.
No, I don't proofread anything I write.
Yes, but I don't worry if something slips through. It's only social media.
Glad to hear readers of the blog proofread!
Thursday, September 29, 2011
"To Gibson, however, none of those stats matter any more."
What's the difference between "anymore" and "any more"?
"Anymore" is an adverb that means "any longer": "I don't want to date you anymore."
You use "any more" alongside a noun: "I don't want to eat any more cake."
Tuesday, September 27, 2011
"Characters are what attaches me to a story."
Um. Subject-verb agreement is what attaches me!
Monday, September 26, 2011
How distracted do you get/how do you act when a book is full of typos?
I chuck it as soon as I see an error.
I write corrections in the book but keep reading.
I wince but read on.
I don't let it bother me. No one's perfect.
I recently read a non-fiction book filled with typos but I had to keep reading because I needed the information!
Friday, September 23, 2011
A law enforcement investigation tracked a delivery of potent marijuana from Northern California to a home in Kentucky where two NFL players were at when the package arrived, according to a report by California Watch.
You definitely don't need the word "at."
Three Covina men are behind bars after they allegedly stole a 30-pack of Tecate beer from a market and attempted to escape but crashed a car and hit an employee who chased them, then one ran through a car wash and another left behind his ID.
Good question, Stephanie!! That sentence is a disaster!
Thursday, September 22, 2011
Too bad the school could find only one girl to play. Hope the team doesn't have to forfeit. (Oh, I guess they do have more players. That would be "Girls' Softball.")
If my kids were at that school, would I have a right to complain about this or would the staff just see me as an uptight parent?
Wednesday, September 21, 2011
Am I naughty if I hope the sign writer got a little bite from a rattlesnake because of this apostrophe error?
Monday, September 19, 2011
Which new officially acceptable Scrabble word do you agree should be allowed?
None should be allowed.
All should be allowed.
I think "blingy" is OK, but not the others.
Friday, September 16, 2011
Thursday, September 15, 2011
Wednesday, September 14, 2011
"U.N. summit to focus on cancer, diabetes, heart and lung disease"
I understand there's a space issue here, but this list is not parallel. Here are the four diseases they're talking about:
The third one in this list as written seems to be just "heart." If there had been more space, the subhead writer could have written "diabetes, heart disease and lung disease."
Monday, September 12, 2011
How many people are in the picture described in this sentence? "I am looking at a photograph of Dominic and Rowan's mother."
It could be one or two.
Thanks to a reader for asking me this question. He correctly noted that the sentence is ambiguous, so congratulations to 30% of you. The photo could be of a man, Dominic, and a woman, Rowan's mother. Or, the photo could be of one person, a woman, who is the mother of both Dominic and Rowan. When you share the noun, you share the apostrophe, so if the woman is the mother of both boys/men, you need only one apostrophe.
To make certain this was not ambiguous, you would have to rewrite the sentence.
Wednesday, September 7, 2011
Tuesday, September 6, 2011
Which is incorrect?
I feel like it looks fantastic.
I feel like sleeping more.
I feel like you're not listening.
None is incorrect.
More than one is incorrect.
Congratulations to 37% of you. The first and third answers are incorrect. You need to use "as if" instead of "like." For more info, check out this Grammar Girl episode.
Friday, September 2, 2011
Thursday, September 1, 2011
Wednesday, August 31, 2011
Tuesday, August 30, 2011
Monday, August 29, 2011
What is wrong with this (from a novel)? "Which I wasn't saying to be nice, it's completely true."
You can't start a sentence with a "Which" clause like this.
You can't use contractions like this.
The punctuation is incorrect.
Nothing is wrong.
Congratulations to 29% of you.
You can start a sentence with a "Which" clause. For more info, see this Grammar Girl episode.
As for the contractions, they're fine.
The punctuation, however, is not fine. You can't just add a sentence to another. You have to add a period after "nice."
Friday, August 26, 2011
"After years of playing and coaching tennis, two facts emerge."
Fact 1: This sentence is incorrect.
Fact 2: This sentence is annoying!
Who wants to rewrite it for me and make me feel better?
Tuesday, August 23, 2011
"The woman who would publish meyer, Megan Tingley, was handed the manuscript in November 2003, right before she got on a cross-country flight to California."
The woman has sold almost 100 million books. Let's give her a capital letter!
Monday, August 22, 2011
Friday, August 19, 2011
"...a doctor who's mission is the health and well-being of children"
"Whose"/"Who's" is one of those pesky pairs of sound-alikes that can confuse your little brain if you're not careful!
So be extra careful!
Wednesday, August 17, 2011
"...to discover there's a way to die that she hasn't yet scene..."
Perhaps the writer was thinking about scenes, but she hasn't seen her error!
Let's just blame it on her brain. I'm sure she knows the difference between the two words.
Tuesday, August 16, 2011
"Here comes 18 months of wasted time"
I would say, "come," since "18 months" is plural. Did the headline writer think of "18 months of wasted time" as a single idea? Seems like a stretch to me! You?
Monday, August 15, 2011
If you see a sign with incorrect grammar or punctuation, what do you do?
You surreptitiously change the sign with a pen, if possible. If it's not possible to change it, you seethe.
You ignore it.
You feel upset but control yourself.
You likely don't even notice it.
Let's work on those 13% of you who aren't anal about grammar!
Thursday, August 11, 2011
"We'd spent all but a few of the $250 with which we'd begun the night."
Something about this is off. "Few" goes with countable nouns, such as dollars, but it doesn't seem to work in this sentence. It's almost as if the writer is suggesting he had 250 $1 bills and only a few were left.
I would go with "little" here. Your opinion?
Wednesday, August 10, 2011
I would say the children's version of Eats Shoots and Leaves, an amusing book about CORRECT PUNCTUATION!!! Eats, Shoots & Leaves: Why, Commas Really Do Make a Difference!
I know that the word "restroom" is a euphemism "bathroom." No one really rests there; we do other business. Although we sometimes use quotation marks if we're being sarcastic (e.g., I just "love" sausages [hate 'em]), no quotation marks are necessary here.
I would like to peer into the brains of people who like to add quotation marks "here and there."
Tuesday, August 9, 2011
Monday, August 8, 2011
What's wrong here? "Amy Winehouse was in the process of adopting a girl from St Lucia, it has been reported."
Hm. A little teeny period is missing in "St," an abbreviation of "Saint." That's it as far as I can tell!
Sunday, August 7, 2011
Thursday, August 4, 2011
"At three months old, I began to notice something."
Now that's a young father! "At three months old, I ..." The "I" of this sentence (the father, who is speaking) is not that age!
A better way:
"I began to notice something when she was three months old."
Wednesday, August 3, 2011
"You need to get used to the idea that people will use your words either intentionally or un."
Technically, you can't just stick in a prefix and use it as a whole word. That said, I kind of like this illegal prefix at the end. You?
Monday, August 1, 2011
What's wrong with this, seen on a sign at a baseball game? "Put me in coach."
More than one of these
I laughed when I saw this sign, so "Nothing" is definitely wrong.
Consider "Put me in coach" and "Put me in first class." Without the comma, the sentence seems to refer to airplane seating.
Yes, you guessed it: A comma is missing, because the sign writer was addressing the baseball coach and requesting to be put into the game.
"Put me in, coach" is correct. Here's another example of this comma, called a comma of address:
"Give me a dollar, coach."
Thursday, July 28, 2011
Monday, July 25, 2011
What's wrong here? "In addition to eating calcium-rich foods, she also takes daily calcium pills."
Well, I agree with 37% of you. It's wordy because you don't need "In addition" and "also" in one sentence. Just one gives off the impression of plurality.
Friday, July 22, 2011
"Last year you were in the All-Star Game, do you rather participate in it or relax during the break?"
I'll bet that when the reporter asked the player this question, the journalist paused for a few beats after saying, "All-Star Game." That's because this is the end of a sentence, and it needs a period; this first part is just a statement. The question actually begins with the "Do you" part. Here's the correct punctuation:
"Last year you were in the All-Star Game. Do you rather participate in it or relax during the break?"
I guess I won't comment on the oddness of "Do you rather participate." "Do you prefer participating ... relaxing ..." would be better, don't you think?
Wednesday, July 20, 2011
"Maybe older people have more experience and been burned a few more times."
This sentence made me sing that old Beach Boys song "Help Me, Rhonda," though I substituted the word "verb" for the lady's name. An additional helping verb, otherwise known as an auxiliary verb, would be very helpful in this sentence.
The original is not wrong, but it made me do a double take when I got to "been." I was expecting another present tense verb: "have more experience and do such and such," for example. Just add another "have" and we're set:
"Maybe older people have more experience and HAVE been burned a few more times."
Tuesday, July 19, 2011
Monday, July 18, 2011
Here was the question:What is wrong here (from a book on 18th-century medicine)? "Not only could hospital surgeons earn fees from teaching apprentices and house pupils; their private practice benefited from their leap in status."
Congratulations to 60% of you. The semicolon in the middle of the sentence should be a comma. One use of semicolons is to separate two complete sentences, but the "not only" part is not a sentence.
Friday, July 15, 2011
"We always knew the west side was dumber then dirt..."
Who's the dumb one here, dear commenter?
("Then" should be "than.")
Thursday, July 14, 2011
"Starting pitchers have collected 11 compete games..."
I hope the pitchers compete while they compLete games!
P.S. This is an example of why Spell Check doesn't wok--I mean, work!
Wednesday, July 13, 2011
“I didn’t take it too personal.”
Great at hitting home runs. Not so great at adding that "ly," which would turn "personal" into "personally."
I won't take it personally.
Tuesday, July 12, 2011
Monday, July 11, 2011
What's wrong with this sentence? "The most interesting third person narratives jump into character's heads to show their thought processes."
More than one of these problems.
Congrats to 46% of you. The main error is that "character's" should be "characters'," since you are talking about more than one character. A minor error is another punctuation problem, a missing hyphen in "third-person narratives."
Friday, July 8, 2011
"Casey Anthony will be freed July 17 after she was acquitted of first-degree murder."
Someone needs to be arrested for this sentence! I had to read it several times because it was so weird. Let's banish the word "after":
"Casey Anthony, who was acquitted of first-degree murder, will be freed July 17."
Thursday, July 7, 2011
Although I'm not following the plot, I'm pretty sure it was supposed to say "Hangar 25."
A hanger goes with clothes but a hangar goes with airplanes!
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Tuesday, July 5, 2011
"Sale on cantaloupe melons"
As opposed to cantaloupe cucumbers?
The word "melons" seems unnecessary here. The only reason to use the word "melons" seems to be to explain what kind of fruit a cantaloupe is. Anyone other than ESL students not know this?
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Friday, July 1, 2011
Fuzzy spelling here. Those items that you write letters on are called stationery ("letters" contains the letter "e," as does the word "stationery"). "Stationery" is a noun. "Stationary," on the other hand, is an adjective that means not moving, as in a stationary bicycle.
Thursday, June 30, 2011
"The event draws anywhere from 90-150 people."
Of course we understand this sentence, but since I'm picky, I need to say something about it!
If you have a "from," then you need a "to":
"The event draws anywhere from 90 to 150 people."
Another option is just a hyphen:
"The event draws 90-150 people."
You get to choose which one you like, but you can't mix them as in "from 90-150."
Wednesday, June 29, 2011
"What's something you've sold that comes out soon that you're excited about?"
This sentence piles on the "that" clauses: two are easy to see but one is hiding.
The obvious ones are "that comes out soon" and "that you're excited about." The hidden one is "you've sold" (just add an imaginary "that" before it: "...something that you've sold...").
You can't have three clauses modifying one noun/pronoun, "something" in this case.
It's an awkward mouthful, so let's rewrite it:
"Which of your recent sales comes out soon and makes you excited about its debut?"
This isn't perfect so if anyone wants to try, please go ahead!
Tuesday, June 28, 2011
Monday, June 27, 2011
What's wrong with this sentence? "He was brown haired, clean shaven, and had an engaging smile."
One or more hyphens is missing.
A comma is incorrect.
A word is missing.
Nothing is wrong.
Congratulations to 15% of you. The word "was" is missing before "clean shaven." This keeps the sentence parallel: verb, verb, verb ("was," "was," "had").
No hyphens are required because the adjectives come after the verb. They would be necessary if they came before the verb (e.g., The brown-haired, clean-shaven man was cute).
No comma error, either.
Friday, June 24, 2011
Thursday, June 23, 2011
"I don't think your question is premature at all, but very relevant."
I don't think this punctuation is optimal. I kinda think a semicolon would be good, if we reword the end:
"I don't think your question is premature at all; rather, it's very relevant."
A comma in the original sentence makes the sentence too run of the mill, in my opinion. The semicolon in the rewrite adds emphasis to the fact that the question is relevant.
Wednesday, June 22, 2011
"Dragon hibernation, which we call brumation is a semi-dormant state they may have for a few weeks to a few months, but only in winter."
The clause "which we call brumation" needs a closing comma. It is extra information, as discussed in this post.
So, the sentence should read "Dragon hibernation, which we call brumation, is ..."
Time to feed our dragon some crickets!
Monday, June 20, 2011
What's wrong with this? [Narrator thinks to self about baby names] "I like Emma. And Ella. And Hannah." [Second character says] "Does every baby name have to be a palindrome?"
Congratulations to 31% of you. The source of the error is the word "palindrome," a word that is spelled the same both forwards and backwards. "Hannah" is an example, but "Emma" and "Ella" are not palindromes.
Wednesday, June 15, 2011
"I'm an alumni."
We don't speak or write much Latin these days, but this is a Latin error. It's the equivalent of saying "I'm a people."
"Alumni" is the masculine plural. The feminine plural is "alumnae." The singular words are "alumnus" (male) and "alumna" (female).
Tuesday, June 14, 2011
Monday, June 13, 2011
This is part of the first sentence of a middle grade novel: "Each type of substitute teacher had its own special weakness…" Your opinion?
I want to read more because this really grabs me.
I need to read more to see if I want to give this book a chance.
I do not want to read more because this sentence is awful.
Seems that few people like this beginning. The "its" threw me the most.
Friday, June 10, 2011
"...its a bit thin and glib to call a masterpiece, but it's still a delicious trifle..."
Which its/it's is incorrect, apostrophe and film buffs?
Thursday, June 9, 2011
Wednesday, June 8, 2011
"Seventeen years old Andra’s life is full."
This sentence is not a good way to start a query letter!
When you have multiple words that combine to describe a noun (called a compound adjective), you need to add hyphens to join them up together. So it would need to be "Seventeen-year-old Andra." But this sentence has too many words describing "life," so we need to rearrange it. One option is this:
"The life of seventeen-year-old Andra is full."
That's not so wonderful. How about this:
"Seventeen-year-old Andra has a full life."
Tuesday, June 7, 2011
What is wrong with this headline? "Terrifying videos emerge of deadly tornado"
Well, I take issue with the word order. The prepositional phrase "of deadly tornado" goes with "videos," but it is next to "emerge." It would be much better to write "Terrifying videos of deadly tornado emerge"
Ah. That word order is no longer terrifying!
Wednesday, June 1, 2011
Is this a bad sentence?
"A pilot's final words before his doomed private jet plunged into a house in Kent have been replayed at an inquest into the deaths of its five occupants."
Well, it's grammatically correct, at least. The phrase "before his doomed private jet plunged into a house in Kent" separates the noun "words" with the verb "have been replayed."
As far as is it bad, you could argue that it's long and slightly awkward. Perhaps breaking it up into two sentences would be good.
Anyone want to try?
Monday, May 30, 2011
Which word is used incorrectly here? "While I spent over two years querying agents and small presses, my manuscript laid dormant."
More than one is incorrect.
The sentence is just fine as is.
The pesky verb "to lie" is the source of the error here. The simple past tense of "to lie" is "lay"; the past participle of "to lie" is "laid."
Monday, May 23, 2011
Which is correct?
It's a matter of principle. 3 (4%)
There was no way to tell what
organizational principal was at work. 0 (0%)
The principal was mad. 1 (1%)
The principle on my loan is $100,000. 0 (0%)
More than one is correct. 61 (91%)
No answer is correct. 2 (2%)
Guess that was too easy!
Thursday, May 19, 2011
"...when listening to him talk, he doesn't seem to have lost much confidence."
Someone has lost his sense of grammar!
The problem lies in the word "listening." The "he" of the sentence--the baseball player--is not the one listening, so we need to specify:
"...when I listen to him talk, he doesn't seem to have lost much confidence."
Wednesday, May 18, 2011
The problem that I am having concerns the use of 'More than a certain value' and then the use of the appropriate form of the verb to be; in case of the latest poll, the statement would be: More than one is correct.
According to my understanding, More than one translates into, or should translate into, at least two and possibly more; now if that interpretation of the phrase before the auxiliary is correct, then how can we justify the use of 'is' instead of 'are' as the correct form of the verb.
Sentence Sleuth here:
According to Bryan Garner ("Garner's Modern American Usage," p. 779), "The phrase 'more than one' generally takes a singular verb, not a plural one ... even though the sense is undeniably plural."
Garner goes on to explain some nuances, but the bottom line is that you use a singular verb.