Courtesy of CNN yesterday afternoon:
"Hero pilot, Capt. Chesley 'Sully' Sullenberger retires"
Just one little comma missing. When you use what's called an appositive, you need to surround it with commas, as here:
"The author of Oliver Twist, Charles Dickens, created the character of Mr. Bumble."
"Charles Dickens" is the appositive. It clarifies "The author of OT."
In CS 353, we need a comma after "Sullenberger" because "Capt. Chesley 'Sully' Sullenberger" is an appositive.
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