Giveaway Results

Here was the rewriting challenge:

"As a product marketing manager, keeping a pulse on what the competition is doing is critical."

Congratulations to winner Ginny Baird, who created this succinct sentence:

A product marketing manager keeps a pulse on the competition.

She wins a free copy of The Curious Case of the Misplaced Modifier by Moi and The Grammar Devotional by Mignon Fogarty.

The two runners-up are Heather Swarthout and David Wolf, who each win a free copy of The Curious Case of the Misplaced Modifier by Moi.

Thanks to everyone who entered the contest.