Seen on a Web site (the lead sentence of the article):
"When looking for Manhattan's latest in inexpensive food, the East Village and Lower East Side have always been good places to start."
Nice misplaced modifier there; not a good way to start. When I visited the Lower East Side last year I did look for some good food, but in this sentence no person is looking for the food. The East Village and Lower East Side certainly aren't. Just add a "you're" and you're set:
"When you're looking for Manhattan's latest in inexpensive food, the East Village and Lower East Side have always been good places to start."
I know I've harped on this repeatedly, but this was an egregious example and in the first sentence to boot!
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