A subhead in today's paper:
"U.N. summit to focus on cancer, diabetes, heart and lung disease"
I understand there's a space issue here, but this list is not parallel. Here are the four diseases they're talking about:
The third one in this list as written seems to be just "heart." If there had been more space, the subhead writer could have written "diabetes, heart disease and lung disease."
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