tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5957711516423189280.post847396472541573933..comments2023-05-06T01:52:27.335-07:00Comments on The Sentence Sleuth: Criminal Sentence 597: Need Another "And"The Sentence Sleuthhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/09253486236870691918noreply@blogger.comBlogger4125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5957711516423189280.post-73723088083916969962011-10-05T13:07:16.864-07:002011-10-05T13:07:16.864-07:00Correctamundo, Westley. (Is that a word?!)Correctamundo, Westley. (Is that a word?!)The Sentence Sleuthhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09253486236870691918noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5957711516423189280.post-7120345275381210432011-09-16T08:28:46.200-07:002011-09-16T08:28:46.200-07:00Your title was "Need Another "And"&...Your title was "Need Another "And"", yet your solution added the word 'disease' rather than 'and'. I thought that you were heading towards "...cancer, diabetes, and heart and lung disease." Which adds an 'and' between the last two items (one of which is a compound item).<br /><br />Is that what you had in mind when you wrote the title??Westleyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09586869004295098058noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5957711516423189280.post-42941546646983388092011-09-15T11:10:09.724-07:002011-09-15T11:10:09.724-07:00Duncan, love it!Duncan, love it!The Sentence Sleuthhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09253486236870691918noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5957711516423189280.post-75228474130854358482011-09-14T19:23:25.752-07:002011-09-14T19:23:25.752-07:00Or:
"U.N. summit to focus on heart and lung...Or:<br /><br /><br />"U.N. summit to focus on heart and lung disease, cancer, and diabetes."<br /><br /><br />Seems neater than repeating the word "disease".. what do you think?Duncanhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10570195387849213678noreply@blogger.com