From a blog post:
"Seventeen years old Andra’s life is full."
This sentence is not a good way to start a query letter!
When you have multiple words that combine to describe a noun (called a compound adjective), you need to add hyphens to join them up together. So it would need to be "Seventeen-year-old Andra." But this sentence has too many words describing "life," so we need to rearrange it. One option is this:
"The life of seventeen-year-old Andra is full."
That's not so wonderful. How about this:
"Seventeen-year-old Andra has a full life."
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