Heard on a TV show (a father was talking about discovering his daughter's blindness):
"At three months old, I began to notice something."
Now that's a young father! "At three months old, I ..." The "I" of this sentence (the father, who is speaking) is not that age!
A better way:
"I began to notice something when she was three months old."
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