I was watching America's Next Top Model and was surprised by something Tyra Banks said when critiquing a model wannabe:
"She’s the noun, not the verb. She looks like a model but she isn’t modeling."
What an astute statement. Strong verbs make good sentences; strong verbs must make good models, too.
So before you parade your sentences out on the runway, consider asking yourself if they're top-model quality.
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