From something I edited yesterday:
"Care and attention is given to each and every customer that calls us."
Four boo-boos here.
1) "Care and attention" is a plural subject, so "is" is incorrect.
2) "is given to" is passive voice, which is not the best writing style. Who is giving?
3) "each and every" is a wordy way of saying "every."
4) "that" usually follows inanimate objects, not people, so I prefer "who" in this case.
Overall, a pretty weak sentence. No hope for rehabilitation here.
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