From one of those mailed cards that advertise something:
"Hurry time is Limited!"
What is limited? Hurry time? Well, no
Before we go on, I'd like to complain about that capital L. No capital is Needed unless all of The words are capped or unless It's a proper Name. See how dumb random capitalization Looks? Caps do not equal emphasis.
Now, what to do about the hurry time?
Just add a comma!
Hurry, time is limited!
Or you could make it two sentences:
Hurry! Time is limited. (just one exclamation point needed)
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