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Wednesday, June 16, 2010

Criminal Sentence 403: Completely Messed Up

From a book I read:

"Their sense of space and time are completely messed up."

What else is messed up in this sentence?

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5 comments:

Anonymous said...

Their sense of space and time is messed up.


Jeffrey Morris

Lizzy said...

Their sense ... is

Guido Henkel said...

"Sense" is singular.

The Sentence Sleuth said...

Wow. You guys should run this blog!
P.S. Sorry the poll doesn't seem to be working.

Anonymous said...

Unless you're Einstein, space and time are very different things. So I would correct the sentence this way: "Their senses of space and time are completely messed up."