Here was the question:
When you read this headline subhead (about nominee Kagan), what is your assumption? "As Clinton staffer, confidence clear"
I assume Clinton is confident in Kagan's ability. 1 (2%)
I assume Kagan is confident in her own ability. 15 (31%)
I assume Kagan is confident in Clinton's ability. 3 (6%)
I am uncertain who is confident about what. 29 (60%)
My first impression was that Clinton was confident in Kagan. When I read the article, it reveals that Kagan is confident in herself. This subheadline could have been a lot better:
Kagan clearly confident when Clinton staffer
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