From a book I am reading (with British spelling):
"Compared to the cheap travelling clothes of these passengers, he was quite the dandy."
This sentence compares "cheap clothes" to "he." Uh-oh.
Here's a better version:
"He was quite the dandy compared to these cheaply clothed passengers."
The sentence makes the writer!
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