From something I edited:
"[The company] has transformed their client's dreams into reality."
At least two problemas here.
1) Only one client? How sad.
2) Have anything uncliché-ish to say?
3) Some may argue that "their" does not match a singular company name. Others say that using the plural to mean the entire company is ok.
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