From something I edited recently:
"Several actions have been taken with great success including (but not limited to)..."
Well, if this isn't wordy and repetitive, I don't know what is. This is the worst kind of blather.
The word "include" by definition means you're giving a partial list, so you don't need to say it again and repeat it again (just kidding there).
This sentence is also passive. Why not say who did what exactly?
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