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Tuesday, April 19, 2011

Criminal Sentence 541: Putting Your Cough to Bed

From a book I read:

"Now bedridden, his cough grew worse."

Poor little cough, sitting in bed! Let's help it feel better:

"He was now bedridden, and his cough grew worse."


queenofenglish said...

This one made me laugh.

MM the Queen of English

The Sentence Sleuth said...

Laugh and cringe!