We had some lively discussion about CS 513, so here's another similar sentence to consider:
"Their capture and successful prosecution was the top priority."
The question, again, is this: Is this one subject or two separate subjects? To me, capture is one thing, and prosecution is another. The police do one, and the lawyers do the other. Thoughts?
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