From today's newspaper (about Southwest's new frequent-flier program):
"Cashing in an award will become drastically different under the new program and will look more similar to other airlines' programs."
What exactly is this sentence comparing?
Cashing in an award
will look more similar to
other airlines' programs
Let's just scrap this icky sentence. Anyone want to try to rewrite it?
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