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Wednesday, September 15, 2010

Criminal Sentence 446: Where's Your Mustache?

From a book I recently read:

"There in the parking lot was this lumbering big guy with a mustache in a casual suit."

Ha ha!


ChildsPlay said...

That sounds like an impressive mustache.

Anonymous said...

Maybe Stache was telling Big Guy that the suit was worse than his normal hair shirt. Too bad the criminals' sentences were muffled.

Anonymous said...

In the parking lot was this lumbering mustachioed big guy wearing a casual suit.

The Sentence Sleuth said...

Make sure you don't give your mustache more credit than is due!