From something I edited:
"Besides these kinds of adventures are best shared with friends."
I had to read this sentence twice before I got it. I thought at first that "Besides these kinds of adventures" went together. Nope.
The sentence would be clearer with a comma:
"Besides, these kinds of adventures are best shared with friends."
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