From a book I finished recently:
"I looked at every teenager walking down the road differently."
So the kids were walking differently? Were they members of Monty Python's Ministry of Silly Walks, that famous British comedy skit from the 70s?
This is an example of a misplaced modifier. In this case, the word "differently" is misplaced. It seems to modify "walking," but it truly modifies "looked." The speaker has started looking at teenagers differently.
Fixing it is fairly easy: just move the word "differently" so that it modifies "looked":
"I looked differently at every teenager walking down the road."
And please be careful that your adverbs clearly modify what they're supposed to, especially if you have more than one verb or adjective in your sentence.
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