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What's wrong with this? “How I work with my clients and my expectations for and of my clients are completely different from every single other agent out there.”
Problem with subject-verb agreement 15 (18%)
Incorrect word choice 11 (13%)
Faulty comparison 41 (50%)
Misplaced modifier 14 (17%)
50% of you are right. You can't compare "how I work with my clients and my expectations for and of my clients" with "every single other agent out there."
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