I was editing something yesterday and one paragraph contained the phrase "even though" three times. I would prefer you use it no times. Even though the phrase "even though" is grammatically correct, it's wordy. I would go with "although."
Another phrase to avoid is the super wordy "despite the fact that."
Despite the fact that you might want to use the words even though in your sentence, I recommend that you don't.
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