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Thursday, November 10, 2011

Criminal Sentence 613: My Birthday Wish

From a blog post:

"Personally, I always fear the shorter revisions, they usually contain the most work."

As a favor to me on my birthday, please use correct punctuation:

"Personally, I always fear the shorter revisions; they usually contain the most work."

Thanks!

3 comments:

Destiny said...

As a regular follower, I wish you a wonderful, youthful happy birthday!

ChildsPlay said...

Happy birthday, Bonnie.

The Sentence Sleuth said...

Thanks, guys! Yummy chocolate gelato cake!!