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Saturday, August 27, 2016
Monday, August 8, 2016
Criminal Sentence 677: The Thread Police
The Phoenix area is home to a serial shooter, who has killed seven people. I hope they catch him pronto! This criminal sentence comes from an article about this criminal:
"The thread police say links the nine incidents to one another is forensics."
When I first read this sentence I asked myself what the thread police are.
It turns out that this sentence needs a strategically placed "that":
"The thread that police say links the nine incidents to one another is forensics."
Even better would be to eliminate the "to be" verb and more wordiness:
"Police say that forensics links the nine incidents."
By the way, I wondered whether "forensics" is singular or plural. When the word refers to the discipline of forensics, it is singular.
"The thread police say links the nine incidents to one another is forensics."
When I first read this sentence I asked myself what the thread police are.
It turns out that this sentence needs a strategically placed "that":
"The thread that police say links the nine incidents to one another is forensics."
Even better would be to eliminate the "to be" verb and more wordiness:
"Police say that forensics links the nine incidents."
By the way, I wondered whether "forensics" is singular or plural. When the word refers to the discipline of forensics, it is singular.
Friday, August 5, 2016
Criminal Sentence 676: Don't Be an "Ass"!
Happy Friday! I was looking at descriptions of new movies and came across this gem on the IMDb app about the film "How to Be Yours":
"Two people driven by their professional ambitions fall in love and are forced to reassess their goals ass they encounter the trials of a serious relationship."
The movie got a 7.2 rating, but I'll give that sentence a 10 for its entertainment value!
"Two people driven by their professional ambitions fall in love and are forced to reassess their goals ass they encounter the trials of a serious relationship."
The movie got a 7.2 rating, but I'll give that sentence a 10 for its entertainment value!
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