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Wednesday, March 6, 2013

Criminal Sentence 638: It's Just Lunch

From something I am editing (space related):

"...the demanding requirements of lunching humans into orbit..."

This was part of a very long sentence.

Are lunching humans demanding? I suppose I would demand no mustard but lots of mayo on my sandwich.


Anonymous said...

I wonder if this is somehow related to the "5 second burp" you wrote about.

Lynn said...

I often wonder if I've committed some of these, great blog, funny and informative.