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Wednesday, May 4, 2011

Criminal Sentence 549: Inferior Size

From a book I read (said by one character to the other):

"We were renting a place, down in Castello. Forty-one square meters..."

No problem there. The problem came in something in the next paragraph:

"...a forty-one-meter apartment..."

Now that's small!

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