What's the best way to rewrite this? "As the owner of your business, it is imperative that you learn about the business."
As the owner of your business, it is imperative that you learn about it. 13 (21%) | |
As the owner of your business, you must learn about the business. 12 (20%) | |
As the owner of your business, you must learn about it. 27 (45%) | |
No rewriting necessary. 9 (13%) |
Congrats to 45% of you. The initial problem here is that "it" can't follow "As the owner of your business." "You" needs to go there. The second item to be concerned about is the repetition of the word "business." Therefore, the third choice is best.
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Detective Pinkersolve,
Is it wrong to interpret the first business as the entreprise you own and the second business as the very industry that your establishment specializes in?
Hi. It's Bonnie!
Anyway, yes, the person writing this sentence was talking about only one business.
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