From today's newspaper:
"Unlike California, there is no time limit in Arizona."
Be careful with sentences that start with a comparison word such as "like" and "unlike." You have to be sure you're comparing the right things. This sentence compares "California" and "there," not what the journalist had in mind.
All you have to do is add a little "in":
"Unlike in California, there is no time limit in Arizona."
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