Two sentences from an online article:
1) "Their secret: thin crust, half the cheese, and extra vegetables."
2) "The restaurant boasts about their perfect-sized lunch combos as if super-sized individual pizzas and high-calorie 'side' salads are a good thing."
Both of these sentences suffer from the same problem: the number of items don't match.
Sentence 1: "their secret" is singular, whereas what comes after the verb is plural (three things are listed).
Sentence 2: "a good thing" is singular, whereas what comes before the verb is plural.
Both nouns (secret/thing) should be plural to match the other side of the equation.
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