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What's wrong with this? "This book is dedicated to my wife whose love and support have made it possible."
Grammar 31 (32%)
Spelling 2 (2%)
Punctuation 63 (65%)
65% of you are correct. This sentence would be better with a comma after "wife"; otherwise, it suggests that the person has more than one wife and the author is thanking the one who provided love and support.
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