This one from Us Magazine online has me puzzled.
Read more: http://www.usmagazine.com/celebrity-news/news/marc-anthony-throws-tantrum-over-jennifer-lopezs-new-beau-20111412#ixzz1gXBPb8OQ
What's the best place for "since their July split"?
Marc Anthony is up in arms that, since their July split, his ex Jennifer Lopez has moved on with a much younger man.
or maybe
Marc Anthony is up in arms that his ex Jennifer Lopez has moved on with a much younger man.
Do Marc and Jennifer deserve this much sentence parsing?
I know the answer. You?
I know the answer. You?
Well, Stephanie is right that this is not a good sentence. I like this rewrite she offered (with the addition of commas): "Marc Anthony is up in arms that his ex, Jennifer Lopez, has moved on with a much younger man."
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