"His weakened state was understandable given the hours he had spent crafting the bill and incorporating her edits, to say northing of the stress of working to elevate her to the presidency."
His weakened state was understandable given the hours he had spent crafting the bill and incorporating her edits in addition to the stress of working to elevate her to the presidency.
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ReplyDeleteHis weakened state was understandable given the hours he had spent crafting the bill and incorporating her edits in addition to the stress of working to elevate her to the presidency.