The Sentence Sleuth

DOWN WITH CRIMINAL SENTENCES!!

Tuesday, March 8, 2011

Criminal Sentence 521: Sexy Golf Game

From something I'm editing:

"There were golf pictures of foursomes."

This sentence does not evoke what the author intended!

The Sentence Sleuth at 7:33 AM

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The Sentence Sleuth: I'm a copy editor and writer. I wrote The Curious Case of the Misplaced Modifier: How to Solve the Mysteries of Weak Writing, published in 2006 and now available in paperback. In 2007-2008, I wrote "The Sentence Sleuth" column for Writer's Digest magazine.

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