From something I read recently:
"He took everything that he found immediately to the Lost Property Office."
This adverb--"immediately"--needs to be redirected from the Lost Property Office to the Office of Correctly Placed Adverbs. Right now, it seems to be describing how the man found everything, but it should really be describing how he took everything:
"He immediately took everything that he found to the Lost Property Office."
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