From a book I read recently:
"If it’s available, make sure to order Armagnac."
This is a common mistake: using a pronoun before you've mentioned what the noun is. A pronoun refers back to a noun that you've already mentioned, so if you haven't mentioned the noun yet, it confuses the reader. To solve this problem, just switch the pronoun and noun around:
"If Armagnac’s available, make sure to order it."
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