Wednesday, June 16, 2010

Criminal Sentence 403: Completely Messed Up

From a book I read:

"Their sense of space and time are completely messed up."

What else is messed up in this sentence?

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5 comments:

  1. AnonymousJune 16, 2010 at 9:13 AM

    Their sense of space and time is messed up.


    Jeffrey Morris

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  2. UnknownJune 16, 2010 at 9:26 AM

    Their sense ... is

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  3. Guido HenkelJune 16, 2010 at 10:07 AM

    "Sense" is singular.

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  4. The Sentence SleuthJune 16, 2010 at 11:18 AM

    Wow. You guys should run this blog!
    P.S. Sorry the poll doesn't seem to be working.

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  5. AnonymousJune 16, 2010 at 5:55 PM

    Unless you're Einstein, space and time are very different things. So I would correct the sentence this way: "Their senses of space and time are completely messed up."

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